5/24 #3: Prompt #18 (Rewritten 5/31)
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lonetreadTitle: Adopted
Fandom: Moonlight
Word Count: 100
Rating: K+
Prompt:un_love_you#18 - I pity you.
A/N: Set during WLB.
“This is the way it’s supposed to be.” Even as Mick says the words, obviously determined to make himself fully believe them, I can hear the disappointment in his voice. I’m sad for him, too; he was denied yet another part of the human existence taken from him so long ago which he still holds so dear. “I just never realized how much I wanted a family until I almost had one.”
But you do.
I wish he could have the one he wants so badly, but failing that… he has me.
It’s not the same, but it’s a start.
Fandom: Moonlight
Word Count: 100
Rating: K+
Prompt:
un_love_you#18 - I pity you.A/N: Set during WLB.
“This is the way it’s supposed to be.” Even as Mick says the words, obviously determined to make himself fully believe them, I can hear the disappointment in his voice. I’m sad for him, too; he was denied yet another part of the human existence taken from him so long ago which he still holds so dear. “I just never realized how much I wanted a family until I almost had one.”
But you do.
I wish he could have the one he wants so badly, but failing that… he has me.
It’s not the same, but it’s a start.
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Rewritten, 50 words longer and with the plot it was originally intended to have:
Title: Sorry
Fandom: Moonlight
Word Count: 150
Rating: K+
A/N: Set during Fever. Because at this point, it's pretty obvious that's what all my best writing is. That H/C kink of mine....
The cold grip of his hands had almost numbed parts of my arm by the time he sank his teeth in.
And then all the feeling came flooding back.
The sensation was not as painful as I’d expected, but it was nevertheless intense, and strangely intimate.
I felt very close to him, and knew this would change things in none of the ways he probably feared, but certainly in others.
And then suddenly it was over, I was holding a towel to my arm, and we were both searching for something to say.
“Are you okay?” he whispered finally.
I nodded. “I’m fine. You?”
He nodded, somewhat stiffly, in return, and wiped his mouth self-consciously, his eyes darting away again.
I felt a sudden stab of pity, and he looked at me then, like he wanted to say something but didn’t quite know how.
“I’m sorry,” he managed.
“I’m not.”
Fandom: Moonlight
Word Count: 150
Rating: K+
A/N: Set during Fever. Because at this point, it's pretty obvious that's what all my best writing is. That H/C kink of mine....
The cold grip of his hands had almost numbed parts of my arm by the time he sank his teeth in.
And then all the feeling came flooding back.
The sensation was not as painful as I’d expected, but it was nevertheless intense, and strangely intimate.
I felt very close to him, and knew this would change things in none of the ways he probably feared, but certainly in others.
And then suddenly it was over, I was holding a towel to my arm, and we were both searching for something to say.
“Are you okay?” he whispered finally.
I nodded. “I’m fine. You?”
He nodded, somewhat stiffly, in return, and wiped his mouth self-consciously, his eyes darting away again.
I felt a sudden stab of pity, and he looked at me then, like he wanted to say something but didn’t quite know how.
“I’m sorry,” he managed.
“I’m not.”
