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I actually got Zera to admit that section 5 of SP sucks. This means it sucks A Lot. Definitely going to have to build in some time for rewriting. And I still haven't finished section 2! DDD:
89% done, 110 words to go. Not counting section 5. Section 5, ihu. STOP SUCKING PLZ.
Thank god for Amnesty Wednesday.
For now, sleep tiems! (I'm gonna wake up at 4am to watch a TZ ep I haven't seen. It'll be good times. As it always is when I do this. Except for when whatever ep it is turns out to suck (e.g., "Lady Anne", "Mute", "Thing About Machines"), so hopefully this one'll be worth it. At any rate, I'll be able to check it off my list [24/156 to go!], so that's alright, then. :))
ETA 6/13:
Completely rewrote section 5. There'd been three things I'd wanted to address/considered addressing in this section: 1. prison intake, 2. hormones, 3. the death of my OMC. The timeline made it impossible to get those all in at once, so the first version was just (1). And it sucked, so instead of just trying to rewrite it, I demolished it completely and wrote about (2) and (3) instead. You have no idea how much better it is. I am pretty fucking thrilled. It might even make an alright ending if I decide I don't want to post them backwards. (I adore section 1, but I've been unsure about its potential as an ending. This one would be much much much better.) Yays! :DDD
Also, TZ ("The Whole Truth") was pretty good. Dated, but good. <3
89% done, 110 words to go. Not counting section 5. Section 5, ihu. STOP SUCKING PLZ.
Thank god for Amnesty Wednesday.
For now, sleep tiems! (I'm gonna wake up at 4am to watch a TZ ep I haven't seen. It'll be good times. As it always is when I do this. Except for when whatever ep it is turns out to suck (e.g., "Lady Anne", "Mute", "Thing About Machines"), so hopefully this one'll be worth it. At any rate, I'll be able to check it off my list [24/156 to go!], so that's alright, then. :))
ETA 6/13:
Completely rewrote section 5. There'd been three things I'd wanted to address/considered addressing in this section: 1. prison intake, 2. hormones, 3. the death of my OMC. The timeline made it impossible to get those all in at once, so the first version was just (1). And it sucked, so instead of just trying to rewrite it, I demolished it completely and wrote about (2) and (3) instead. You have no idea how much better it is. I am pretty fucking thrilled. It might even make an alright ending if I decide I don't want to post them backwards. (I adore section 1, but I've been unsure about its potential as an ending. This one would be much much much better.) Yays! :DDD
Also, TZ ("The Whole Truth") was pretty good. Dated, but good. <3